frausorge: Joey Fatone in a green jacket, looking down and smiling broadly (the inward eye)
Lesa ([personal profile] frausorge) wrote in [personal profile] brandywine28 2012-02-18 06:01 am (UTC)

This is really lovely. I like how you show the solidity of the friendship between Joey and Lance, how much history we get to see in the course of a relatively short piece. And also the gradual shift over the course of the evening that lets them get close in this way at last - that's terrific.

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